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Kenz (1 like)
Amazing editing- that first scene was awesome! I love the clock- makes it feel like an animation
Aug 23, 2022, 6:10 PM
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Nicolas (1 like)
The characters' voices are awesome! I enjoyed all the sound effects, too. I liked how your characters came together to save Halloween.
Aug 22, 2022, 2:51 AM
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Michael (1 like)
This is has great comedic timing. I can only imagine how well it will be with music and sound effects! Great job!
Aug 22, 2022, 1:34 AM
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Eden (1 like)
Ahhhh! This was so fun to watch! The opening and that evil cackle gave me chills :0
As a person who loves Halloween, this is super relatable. The sibling bond was so well done, and I love the voices as well! Great job!
Aug 21, 2022, 11:53 PM
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Noah (1 like)
I really love the opening montage , it’s very scary and foreboding it really captured my interest , I really like the sister and brother bond shown it gave a lot of heart to the submission. I also like how the plot of becoming your Halloween costume is used and how there is support groups and everything it makes for such an interesting world . However I do think the idea of the witch wanting to stay young is very expected and I would change that aspect of the story . I like how the story is like a goosebumps novel and the camera angels where very interesting to watch . A great short story and I’m glad to have watched it
Aug 21, 2022, 11:03 PM
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Samara (1 like)
What an intriguing story, I love the Easter eggs as well. Your story is well thought out and I enjoyed it!
Aug 21, 2022, 2:03 PM
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Gillian (1 like)
I love this story! It’s such a cool idea and I love how you started your story off. It really catches the audiences attention. Great job!
Aug 21, 2022, 1:05 AM
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Ana (1 like)
I love this story, I caught some references like the Salt and Pepper costumes from Gravity Falls and the "bleh bleh bleh" from Hotel Transylvania. The animation is pretty good and the voice acting as well. The drawings are well done too. Also, I love the title card as well.
Aug 20, 2022, 5:20 PM
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Zoey (1 like)
I like the Halloween theme, and the vampire going “bleh bleh bleh” was really funny! Cool story! The title card looked super well done!
Aug 18, 2022, 11:03 PM
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Mason (1 like)
So glad to see this one done!! I love what you did with the "spell book" arrow. It was perfect! Everything came together so well and I really enjoyed this story. Such a good job!!
Aug 18, 2022, 4:02 AM
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here is my fully completed story reel, i hope you enjoy <3
This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
Special Thanks:
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The Cheddar Jacks
Annabelle
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