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Mason
Great idea and I liked the music and sound effects. It moved along well and was a great short!
Aug 22, 2022, 6:01 PM
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Maya
I love the concept you have in this story so far! This is a very entertaining story and I can't wait to see what happens next. I think the captions were nice but I always love some narration, at least in the early developments of these stories. I hope you find this feedback useful as you continue to develop your story. Let's get in that final story reel!
Aug 21, 2022, 12:10 AM
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Nainoa
I love the story! Just my opinion, I would've loved it even more if there was the narration. Great job!
Aug 20, 2022, 7:29 PM
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Ness
Some final feedback, would be that this is a grear story, I love the concept, and it is entertaining. I love the story! Although, while the sound effects are amazing, I miss the sound of narration! That is not that much of a problem, so I'll just say it is really good! I look foward to seeing if she and him will become music buddies! Really good Act 1!
Aug 20, 2022, 3:03 PM
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After cycling through many friend groups, each a different musical genre, Otto wants the freedom to listen to anything. This has left him alone-- well maybe not for long.
This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
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