I think your idea of the zodiac influencing the personalities of your characters make for an interesting idea. The idea of elements and traits that are predetermined can make for a cool story where people might try to see if fate is something that can be rewritten.

Unfortunately, I'm unclear who your characters are, what the story is about, or the conflicts and lessons learned. I think if you refined this more, you can create something great and compelling. Good luck!

Your idea of using the zodiac to describe certain character personality traits is very interesting! However I was a bit distracted by the camera being tilted and the static noise, so it was kind of hard for me to hear your narration clearly. These are the only issues; other than that I’d really love to see the direction you take your zodiac/personality concept and the creation of characters that will follow! Great job so far!

Great job on finishing your last week project! I really like the zodiac concept and how it relates to people's personalities. For me, I didn't see that much story from each characters but I do see the main character's journey. If you wanted to develop this story in the future, you could try thinking on how different zodiac signs interact with each other.

Hello laheartzale!

I love how they are rooted in the zodiac signs, pulling from known character traits. One thing I would love to learn more about is the story and where they are headed together. What their journey and character arcs may be, along with the challenges they face ahead and how they plan to grow together, or seperate. How do their personalities clash and/or complement one another, and do they have the power to influence each other, changing our standard view of each sign?

Love all the questions and doors this foundation sets up! Thank you so much for sharing the start of your story and characters. Great job!!

Great job on getting this done. I like that you are taking some very classic characters and putting them together in this story. The story and main conflicts are unclear, but you have strong, dynamic characters so this will be easy to develop. For example, now that Serena understands she isn't alone on her journey, what changes with her journey? How does it become more challenging for her personally? Does having all of these astrological characters with distinct personalities make things easier or harder? This is a very fun concept and you've really nailed down the characters so it will be fun to see how your story grows. Good work!

Hi laheartzale,
Your characters are well known and intriguing but this is like a introduction to your characters. I would want to know more about their story. Your story structure can be developed with some questions like what happen in their lives? Why they are important in your story? What is their missions storywisely? Your artwork and narration is nice. Good job! I know it is hard to finish a story in 8 weeks so congratulations you have finished this program :)

i liked the idea with the sodiac signs but unfortunately, i didn't really get or see a story for the characters. I would have loved to see the characters interact and make their signature features that the signs embody maybe provide challenges for them or make for funny moments.