This submission is so charming and whimsical! I had such a wacky grin on my face while watching your story reel. Thank you so much for sharing this with us!

really enjoyed this, this was super unique! the art and storyboards go well together and i can totally see myself watching a longer version of this!

Amazing work to all involved!

Omggg this is so theatre-worthy! Absolutely love every second of the storyreel, kept me smiling the entire 3.38 minutes! Such a unique storytelling style too, I'm amazed with how much impact it brought without having a single dialogue. I think I never came across your work before, but I'm glad to be here and see the final product! Congratulations on coming this far and I hope you enjoyed working on this storyreel as much as I did watching it :D

Wonderful work! I am so impressed by your drawings. I absolutely love your use of music. It was so nice to listen to while following the story! Congratulations.

The fluidity of this storyboard is insane! I love your use of music and sound effects, especially in terms of comedic timing. Despite the lack of dialogue, the story was easy to understand, which goes to show how well the visuals and audio work together. I'll be keeping a look out for your future projects!

Hi! First of all, I absolutely love the style of this story. The silent film aesthetic matches perfectly with the clown theme. The music and sound effects are edited perfectly.

My one comment would be about the timing. I like that the cut tends to go with the beat of the music and sound effects, and that makes it very fun to watch! However, I feel like it is a bit rushed in some parts, the frames goes by a little too quickly and we couldn't see what's going on.

Overall, everything comes together beautifully and I really enjoy watching it. Amazing job!

Hello,

Great work on your submission!

Your music choices really did a great job of accentuating your story. They established tone and amplified your visual humor.

Your illustrations were active, dynamic and very expressive! Each character's personality was clear and your use of perspective was really impactful!

I was able to understand pretty much the entire story without dialogue so great work with your visual communication as well.

I have one question regarding his banana slip at 3:13 - when he slips on the banana, is he spun toward the girl that liked him as a child? If so, very creative. The banana is a cool story element that really works in this instance. Sometimes you slip and fall into a better life. Good and appropriate theme!

Overall, wonderful job and congrats on completing this course! Excited to see what you do next with this and other projects.

This is very unique and fun to watch! I loved the movie! Great great job! The exaggeration in character design and different angles and just so good! Congratulations! Wishing you all the best!

really well done! def no need any dialogue. your art are wonderful and very clear! the only suggestion i have is i wonder if his story when he's young is needed as it seemed you can just cut that one and start when he's already older. great finish!

Great work of art and sound effects, nice story.

Hello. I like to see your story. I think the story didn't need a dialogue because you used very good emotion expressions in your drawings, and the sound effects helped a lot. Very good job!

Hi! First of all, congratulations on finishing the Xperiential program!

I believe this is the first submission I see from you, so I’m completely new to the story. I really like the fact that you’ve decided to use just visuals and sound effects to tell your story. I know that makes things very difficult, but I think that you have managed to perfectly tell your story, since everything is clear!

I love your art, I instantly emphatize with your character. I love the different angles that you use throughout the story, as well as the great expressiveness that you give to each of the characters.

Good job!

You all did an amazing job. I feel so bad for your main character, he just wants a friend. Great job