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Arin
I like the music and narration for this storyreel, it really does build up emotion within the audience. Good work!
Aug 23, 2022, 8:22 AM
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Zynah
Character development was on point! Moral of the story as well! I'm glad at the end Michael's parents understand him.
Aug 21, 2022, 7:01 PM
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Layan
Knowing the back story, I feel so bad for what Micheal went through but it helps me understand his character. Good job!
Aug 21, 2022, 1:10 PM
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Kalen
Man, this short is sad. I really felt for Micheal and felt bad for him and all his troubles. Reminds me of a recent Pixar film...... I kinda like the art style too.
Aug 20, 2022, 10:45 PM
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Zoey
The moral of the story was really great with him learning to control his emotions and him stalking with his parents, I’m glad he was able to be happy in the end! Great job finishing your story.
Aug 20, 2022, 8:20 PM
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Mason
The backstory really helped me understand Michael's pain and really made sense with his anger. The music added to the emotion and this is a really good story with such a good ending. I really enjoyed watching Michael progress from a super low to a place where he felt seen and heard and understood. Really good story and it has bee fun watching it change each week.
Aug 20, 2022, 3:48 PM
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The story of a boy named Michael who learns to not let his anger get the best of him the hard way.
This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
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