I loved your drawings you clearly have put a lot of effort into this especially since everything is in color. But I think it would be really helpful for your story to have some sort of background music to really enhance the story reel. another thing that I found confusing was the characters. I think if you added something distinctive to the characters to tell them apart, it would make the story a little clearer. But other than that it's a great story.

I’m not entirely sure if my volume isn’t working, but I think the story would definitely benefit from a bit of narration. As of right now I personally find the story hard to understand, but despite that I Can see how much love was put into each frame, the backgrounds especially are gorgeous!

This is such a wonderful story! It is very visually telling. If you added some music, I think this submission would be complete. It was very enjoyable and I am honestly quite proud you have a final submission. I know this program has been long and a little hard to balance so I want to let you know you have done an AWESOME job.