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Bravo on this accomplishment! fantastic production value as well
Aug 24, 2022, 2:10 PM
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Kathleen
This story has a lot of potential. It would be great to have even more visuals. While taking photos of your sketches is challenging in your environment, let's organize a way to learn about how to improve that. Your voice is great for story telling, and the pace is good. The moral got cut off at the end.
Aug 22, 2022, 8:48 PM
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Kelvin
Sorry for the moral cut at the end
Aug 25, 2022, 3:34 PM
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Zynah
Loved the plot and the music in the background added so much!
Aug 21, 2022, 7:05 PM
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Kelvin
Thank you
Aug 25, 2022, 3:34 PM
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Nicolas
Great pacing. This reminds me of a folk tale turned short story. Great music choice and audio.
Aug 20, 2022, 4:03 PM
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Kelvin
Wow!!! thank you so much
Aug 25, 2022, 3:35 PM
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Mason
I really like the story and the moral. Great job and glad to see you finished!
Aug 20, 2022, 12:10 AM
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Kelvin
Thank you
Aug 25, 2022, 3:34 PM
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Here's my whole story for Week eight. I've really tried to fix the whole story and everything order.Thank you everybody for the support
This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
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