HI, I really enjoyed your project! it was really creative, easy to follow, and fun to watch!

The designs are also amazing and really enjoyable!

So happy with this final result!

Hi Royal!! Thank you so much for the kind words! So glad you enjoyed it!

Hi Habiba

I love that you added perspective to your drawings and the tones and colors were a really nice touch to your story. Your story was wonderful! I have been following your story throughout the weeks and I love the growth I have seen from the beginning. Your drawing style is lovely and very clear.

Congratulations on all your hardwork!

That being said, the feedback I have, incase you want to further this reel, is to narrate the story without the "because of that" so it can flow better. I believe it would make your story more seamless.

Great job Habiba, so happy to follow you on IG! happy to have made this connection and follow each others journey!

Hi Daisy!! It’s good to hear your feedback! You’ve been giving very helpful comments that helped me!! Yeah the Voice over I kinda took it in one take all together through ou the movie and was gonna redo it cause I thought the same too, I was concerned that the second take wouldn’t be as natural as I was talking with enthusiasm the first time but yeah I feel you It’s not my favorite part either haha!

And yes, I’m really happy we connected on IG, too excited to follow your journey!! Feel free to reach out for any help or maybe collab 🫡

Congratulations on your project too so original and detailed and fun to watch, really love it !! Keep creating 🙌🏻

Hi Habiba!

I had already had the opportunity to comment on your work in one of your previous submissions. I love the original idea you have had, what a terrible world it would be one in which ice creams are illegal!

You have made a lot of progress since the last time I saw your submission, you have included an amazing amount of drawings. I really like the small notes of color that you have introduced in some images.

Great job and congratulations on finishing the Xperiential program!

Oh thank you so much!! Good to hear your feedback! Your story is absolutely one of the very unique ones and I’m baised with any story that has elderly! Really glad to see the progress shows! I was challenging myself in trying different techniques of drawings and writing scenarios, so glad it shows! Congratulations to you too you’ve done an amazing job too! Hope to see your story becomes an animated project!

Your effort with the drawings is very noticeable! Not only with the characters, but with the scenarios as you have say. I admire you a lot for it, I didn't have time for everything and I decided to leave the scenarios aside haha
Thank you for your nice comments about my story, it really means a lot to me! I hope I can develop my story more :)
If you ever need help with any other projects, feel free to contact me on Discord!

Thank youu! I think we all did a great job haha! And I absolutely I’d love to stay in contact!

Super easy to follow and lovely story of a sweet tooth's worst nightmare o_O. Easy to relate to the main character that way, great job!

Thank you so much Sophia!!

The premise of your story is super simple, which makes the motivation of your character really easy to understand and connect with.

Thank youu! Glad you enjoyed it!

What a fun and engaging story! I love the drawings, too. They are very nice and helpful to tell the story! The framing and facial expressions were very effective and fun to watch! Great job, and congratulations for completing such a cute story reel!

Thank you so much Abby!! Glad you enjoyed it!!

Nice story and funny ending.
Although since the plot is so crazy, I particularly wanted to see an equally crazy development and ending.

Thank you! I appreciate your feedback! Glad you liked it! I’m trying to work on the structure, I personally enjoyed working on it and experimenting, and there’s always room for growth!

I love the whimsy and very child friendly story that this opens up. I think the core of the story screams Pixar to me, in how a child's world would be upended by the loss of Ice Cream. I love the ending (I don't wanna spoil it for everyone) but it was a lovely, heartwarming ending.

Thank you so much! Your words made me so happy! Happy you enjoyed it! 😄

Great work! This has the potential to be developed in many directions. Congrats on all your hard work.

Thank youu!