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Nicolas (1 like)

I enjoyed the music and the art. I think the irony of the story is a great lesson.

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Aug 22, 2022, 4:37 AM

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Grace (1 like)

Love this story! I could understand everything clearly and the music matches it so nicely! It really enhances the sad parts, and made the end all that more touching and sad. This is a lesson we need to learn in every day life as well, so good job with that too. The drawings were simple and clear, they were easy to understand and adorable so amazing work with that. I love how the character develops and changes throughout the story as well! Great work!

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Aug 21, 2022, 7:20 PM

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Mason (1 like)

You did such a good job with all of the final changes. I really liked it and it all came together so well! Great work and I was excited to see this. Good luck to you too and I agree, I will miss this course too!

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Aug 21, 2022, 3:50 PM

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Deep inside the corner of the streets, lies 3 abandoned cats. The eldest one was named bob. Bob was a thief, he robbed things once in a while. Bob had to starve sometimes, but he has 2 other siblings whom he needed to take care of. One day, he decided to rob something bigger.
( I don’t want to spoil the story so I’ll write the last part under a spoilers tag
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Music 🎵: 'Filaments' by @Scott Buckley - the music is not copyrighted

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SPOILERS:
Bob left a note after leaving and after robbing the jewelry store, bob went back to look for his siblings but they were nowhere to be found. They probably left after reading his note. Bob looked back at the trash can, where him and his siblings spent the most time together. He felt sad, because he couldn’t see them again.
It’s been a while, the days went by quick, bob has changed. He became a fish store owner and manages a very busy store. He was busy and it’s been doing well. Perhaps he had no other motivator except for the fish store which was his siblings favorite food. Bob income increased and someone shows up unexpected.
It was his siblings, they’ve found him and asked him to take care of them. They didn’t abandon him, they went around and looked for him. But time has passed, his siblings has changed, and so did bob. He got greedier over the years. Bob had refused and left his siblings. Until one day, fire greets his store.
That night, his store was engulfed in flames, in front of him, was bright red. Turns out, a thief went inside the store and after robbing, he burned the store down.
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Lesson:
At that moment, bob had realized. Everything was taken away from bob. Bob regretted that he left his siblings. Now he doesn’t have money, or his siblings. Not only did he leave his siblings, he also left himself. Bob has nothing left. Bob thinks it’s ironic that he once was a thief, is now being robbed by a thief. Therefore, this story is called “robbed.”

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A little commentary,
I hope you enjoyed this story and thank you if you’ve read this far! Honestly, I will miss this course and everyone was amazing, the hosts and the comments I received was really helpful! Thank you so much everyone and I wish you luck after finishing this course!

This is where the special thanks would go!  I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.

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