I am glad you tried story boarding because I loved the moral of your story, the art is also understandable (I can tell what everything is without you having to explain it) which is not easy to do. The sound was also good, just there is a bit of problem towards the end. Overall good job!

Hi! For this being your first time, you did awesome! I love the art--it's vibrant, fun, and exciting. One thing is that from 2:32 to the end the audio quality was having problems, so perhaps if you plan on adjusting your film you could check out this issue! I've also got to compliment you on your narration--you did a great job displaying the personality of you and your film! Overall, great work!

If it makes you feel better, I am just like you and I had a lot to learn. This class helped me a lot and it looks like you also learned a lot. I think the best part of this class was seeing all the different types of stories and drawings. Those differences are what made it exciting. I would never know you didn't have experience with any of that. This was a good story and I think your art was perfect with it. The moral was so good and I hope you keep doing this if you enjoy it. I think you are good at it! I enjoyed it.