Hi Team Royal/Mizuki!!
Oh my gosh I love your story and presentation, I felt like I was watching a Saturday morning show and wanted to keep watching each episode after! I loved your voice work and villain’s voice as well!! I can’t wait to see where you will take College Guardians, I can see it being a fantastic web series and I would definitely be addicted! Congratulations Team!!

Very nice story! I found each of the characters to be very defined and unique. The character designs were also great.

My favorite character has to be the villain, solely based on how high-energy she was. Definitely a stand-out character!

Overall, you've done a great job with this story. Nice work!

Great beginning so far! It felt like a pilot for an upcoming series

The visuals were strong, good use of lighting so that we know which characters to focus on in the scene, and I also like the different colors you used for each of the three main girls to make them stand out more! The characters personalities were also strong, I also like the anime-esque voice acting of the antagonist girl; It kept me engaged!

Very cool visuals (in space especially) and nice tense background music.
Very cool ominous voice of the badguy, and nice as well how they fade away. The "do it myself" adds to the tension by making it more dangerous.
You're showing the characters and who they are quite clearly and quickly.
Was it an active choice to make one of the voices louder than the others?
"serious scifi shit", hah
Oh damn, I'm actually not sure if that girl at 2:10 is a bully or the villain, very welldone!
The accidental punch at 2:40 is amazing.
Very good voiceacting of the villain girl. Her monologue could perhaps be shorter?
The comment "my heart's racing, can't listen" is cool.
When they defeat the robots, the villain really feels like inside an actual weekly cartoon. Why does the villain leave, though? Or is it just a minion?
I'm very curious for their reasons to (not) want to join. I'd feel like you could explore that further - but it's very good now.
I like your ending; it's not yet entirely sure they will fight back (even though they have to because the villain will attack them) - and it leaves a real sense of curiosity for what's to come.
Cool!