Wow what an intriguing concept! I love your version of werewolf dynamic. You had lots of really clear images, using tone, line work, leading lines, line colour, entertaining gestures/poses and lighting so well. One of my favourite moments is when the guests press the doorbell loads, they answer, and slip on the mat on the way to their parents. The timing and actions were funny and relatable.

I found the first part a bit slow and think taking a few scenes/shots could help get to the inciting incident more efficiently and give it more meaning.

Some questions I have: why is there a seagull? why does his mum come in earlier? why doesnt he have school/something to do in the day, is it holiday? Why dont the parents have a way of getting the moonlight (they must’ve been werewolves for a while?, what did they do without their kid to help?), who’s birthday is it/why was he rushing around so much? (if to prep what wasnt done by parents before, i only got that from thinking more about it after), how is that guy next door so chill with seeing a werewolf?

From the end of the party to the retrieving of the moon rock, I was a bit confused as to what they were doing. Maybe you could clarify that the next door neighbor was into space stuff more clearly early on: with a close up or symbol as a dedicated shot? I personally thought he was searching for the werewolf at the beginning and had something to do with the chickens.

Sorry, lots of little things i asked, i really enjoyed your story! You’ve done loads of amazing work! so many clear drawings!! It was well thought out and i liked your points of humour. I was invested in your character and his attempts at covering for his parents. I hope you can edit a few bits to really make it sing. Well done!!

i loved the idea and the drawings! would have amazing if voice was a little bit clearer, othern than that, every thing is super cool!

I could get some spots where there was no narration, that is fine, it is not required, but it would have cleared a lot up during that Birthday Party scene. Like a table became a grill in the space of two frames, and why was the boy rushing back a lot during 5:23 (it was hard to tell what he was doing. How old is your main protagonist kid? I feel like the werewolves would have a solution to missing "moonlight", like what happens during a New Moon, what about a Monsoon. If having moon light was so important, why did the kid get a skylight and not the parents? Sorry, I apologize for the twenty-questions. But overall your story was cute your staging has really improved. Some of the scenes were really spot on and well down. But I think it was hard to distinguish your "sleepy neighbor friend" and your main protagonist character apart sometimes, maybe a key color or some type of accent color to keep them apart from each other. For a kid trying to keep the secret of werewolves, he broke that rule twice in the span of like 24 hours. The former astronaut was really accepting of a werewolf knocking on his front door. He he, anyways it was a good film, and so many drawings, a lot of hard work was put into this and it shows. Maybe a little more fine tuning with your story and it will be pretty awesome. Keep up the good work mate and thanks for having the courage to show us your submission.