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Erin
Great work on this one! I love the funny eyes you give to the surprised or mad characters, it adds a bit of comedy to an otherwise mainly serious story! I also like that the main character learns their lesson in a way that relates to the beginning struggle and learns that if she treats others with respect she'll learn that everybody else is just as good as her and not as bad as she was lied to and made to believe.
Aug 22, 2022, 6:22 PM
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Nicolas
The story was interesting.
Aug 22, 2022, 3:56 AM
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Mason
Congrats on finishing with everything you have going on! It was a good story with a good lesson and I think you did really good on it. I have enjoyed this story!
Aug 21, 2022, 4:22 AM
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Gillian
Your concept was very interesting! I really liked how there are many different sections all on one earth. You had a very interesting story and a very creative idea!
Aug 21, 2022, 12:44 AM
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Sorry if this feels a bit rushed, I had school for 2 weeks, WEB Training for 2 days and an event for 1 day.
This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
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