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Jenaaz

Loved your visuals, they were very clear and the voiceover helped tell the story. I really liked the concept of your story as well it was a lot of fun to watch

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Aug 23, 2022, 1:57 AM

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Erin

I found this one a little bit confusing, but it was definitely funny and I see a lot of ways to improve it! How pizza ties into the rest of the story is a bit confusing to me. Great work either way!

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Aug 22, 2022, 6:23 PM

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Nicolas

Great beginning! Funny story, I liked the hunger of your character.

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Aug 22, 2022, 2:22 AM

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Annabelle

I really loved your story along with the comedic aspects. Bob was a fun character to follow around on his eating endeavors. Great work!

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Aug 21, 2022, 5:34 PM

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My

I’m not sure if I should be laughing or feeling sorry for bob. Though I do feel a little guilty for chuckling when I saw bob eating a cloud and then fell down XD the intro was super good by the way! Good job!

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Aug 21, 2022, 2:18 AM

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Zoey

Congrats at finishing the story. I thought it was very entertaining and funny! The intro was super professional looking.

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Aug 19, 2022, 12:18 AM

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Mason

School definitely made it a challenge to get these done but I think you still did a good job. I had fun watching your story come together and like the additions you made to the beginning and end! Congrats on getting the project done even though you had school.

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Aug 18, 2022, 3:56 AM

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We didn't really have time to finish due to school starting for us

This is where the special thanks would go!  I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.

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