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Jenaaz
Loved your visuals, they were very clear and the voiceover helped tell the story. I really liked the concept of your story as well it was a lot of fun to watch
Aug 23, 2022, 1:57 AM
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Erin
I found this one a little bit confusing, but it was definitely funny and I see a lot of ways to improve it! How pizza ties into the rest of the story is a bit confusing to me. Great work either way!
Aug 22, 2022, 6:23 PM
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Nicolas
Great beginning! Funny story, I liked the hunger of your character.
Aug 22, 2022, 2:22 AM
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Annabelle
I really loved your story along with the comedic aspects. Bob was a fun character to follow around on his eating endeavors. Great work!
Aug 21, 2022, 5:34 PM
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My
I’m not sure if I should be laughing or feeling sorry for bob. Though I do feel a little guilty for chuckling when I saw bob eating a cloud and then fell down XD the intro was super good by the way! Good job!
Aug 21, 2022, 2:18 AM
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Zoey
Congrats at finishing the story. I thought it was very entertaining and funny! The intro was super professional looking.
Aug 19, 2022, 12:18 AM
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Mason
School definitely made it a challenge to get these done but I think you still did a good job. I had fun watching your story come together and like the additions you made to the beginning and end! Congrats on getting the project done even though you had school.
Aug 18, 2022, 3:56 AM
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We didn't really have time to finish due to school starting for us
This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
Special Thanks:
Team:
The squashed pancakes
Caden
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