I've gotten to see your story develop and may I say it has come a long way. I think your story has a lot of potential. In the future, I would suggest you consider the following:
Try to integrate more visual details about the world your characters are in.
Develop more of the significance of the dog show.
Develop more of the history of the connection between Lotte and Zoey. I feel like their connection at the end doesn't have as large of a meaning when we don't know a whole lot about why it is important that they become friends.
You've done an incredible job with your drawing and I can instantly see the difference between how Lotte and Zoey carry themselves. Those things I mentioned before can further enhance your story if you still wish to work on it. Congrats on making it to this final submission.

I love the story and the message you portray! The animals are so cute and I’m glad they become friends. I’d recommend giving the words longer in screen because they went by too fast for me to read most of the time. If you add more drawings that could solve it because it would allow you to tell the story visually more. Great job! This story is super cute!

This is a nice story with a valuable message! I like that the main characters were animals rather than humans. That tends to make such meaningful messages a touch more accessible.

I like the characters a lot! They're fun and have got a ton of personality. I think I'd suggest more drawings instead of repeating the same ones and adding text. While I think there are a few areas to improve on, this was still such a fun and cute story reel! Great job!

Good job finishing it! Our final week, is done!

Great job finishing! Although, I'm a little confused on the story

I regret to say that I didn't fully understand the story. I love the drawings though.

I was excited to see the changes with sound, visuals, movement! Congratulations on finishing and I enjoyed watching your story from start to finish.

It was cool that you added sound effects and added bright colors to the characters. Good work finishing your project!