i think you have done a great job on your submission i love it

I really liked the final product! The story, the style, the moral. Good job!

The drawings and narration paired together really well! The story was colorful, easy to follow along with, and super engaging! However, I'm not so sure I personally would've used the mom example to go with the theme. The way you described Ted's basic and normal life at the beginning (waking up, work, sleep, that sort of thing) made it seem like whatever would prompt the switch in the story--whatever the "change" would be--would have to do with totally turning his everyday routine upside down (when in reality, in terms of the actions he does on a daily basis it only changed 15 minutes of his day). It's probably just me though, I just thought I'd throw that comment in anyways! Overall, I really liked this film. Your art was great--the way that you incorporated color in ways that really worked with the story was awesome. Great job on this one!

Thanks for the feedback and yeah.. I wanted to do more with the character but I just didn’t have time sadly.

I loved the story! It all came out great! Good job!

This is one deep story with an interesting concept. The drawings are very well done and the narration is really good as well. This moral was very important and very relatable.

I think it worked out really well!! It all came together so well and it was exciting to see your final project. Good job and I think the moral was important and so good with this story.