I love this story! The character types are shown visually very well and I love the message for Vernon and how Candy helps him get there. I was a little confused about how they suddenly were able to travel between worlds, as if the details were not clear to me during their travels. I loved the different worlds, though, and your art is amazing! I also enjoyed how the music changed to set the mood. Awesome job!

OH HEY I'm so glad I got this one to judge!!! I watched the beginning steps of this story! Glad to see it in it's final state! :D AW I love the shiny lil eyes on Vernon when he's sad on the couch and he's getting a pat on the back. You really sell the dynamic between the two! Great work! Also, reacting as I watch this, THE SUDDEN DRAGON WAS HILARIOUS-- That's amazing! And dang, a D20 first roll? That's pretty impressive. I also love their human designs a lot! They're both very fun designs. I like how you also showed pieces of Candy's backstory as well to show that they had the same struggles as Vernon.

I like the originality of the main character's face. The story is interesting. The music sets the tone, and I like the art.

I loved this!!! The story is easy to follow, and the drawings are great!!! The music was wonderful, and helped bring emotion to the story! Fantastic job!