Hey Jospeh! Really great work with your submission! Your story is so heartfelt and genuine; I thoroughly enjoyed watching it!
Also, that was some really cool use of audio effects! It really made the story more vibrant!

My only suggestion to you is that in the montage that you show where the main character recalls an incident from the past - you can pace it a little slower. Because it's such a crucial character moment, I think you can probably give the audience a little more time to undertand it, by pacing the images slower. I had to go back to the video and rewatch that part for the same reason.

But once I did rewatch it, the story came together very beautifully. The effort you've put in this project shows through the sincerity with which you've told the story. Kudos to you for that!

All in all, great work with the story! I thoroughly enjoyed it! I wish you all the best for all your future projects! Have a great day! :)