Wow, the story even tied together at the end, I really enjoyed that. When the kid was on the ground and was being picked up, with that representation it definitely brought back memories of one of my accidents, where I could feel what was happening but my eyes were closed and it felt like a dream, great representation and the pace, music, voice acting, all that really showed your teams efforts. Congratulations.

Thank you so much! I appreciate your comment about your accident. I'm glad it connected with you.

I forgot to add credits:
Grandma and Jon: Jenny Kozoroz
Jake: Jon Snyder
JJ and Michael: Michael Kozoroz
Music: Jared Snyder

I like the drawings, very visual. The narration is magnificent! The storytelling is also great. What a unique storyboard. Overall, great job!

i can relate to this story so much! thank you for the great idea :))

Amazing Job! I have no tips! I loved everything about your story! An amazing job!

Fantastic! Need to add titles for who's body you leaped in and make the audio higher or lower for the kid's voices. Keep up the good work!

Such a cool concept!! I am so impressed you took a risk making it VR!! I think the music and dialogue was super effective in telling the story & your art is really good! I love the idea of switching bodies I guess I just wish I had a little more consistent time in each character so that I could really allign with their emotions! I guess thats the restrictions of short films/storyreels. Well done for taking a risk you've done a great job!

You did a great job helping me understand what other people are going through by walking a mile in their shoes. This creates deep understanding and empathy for others which leads to solutions to the challenges in life. I like how you use the concept of VR as a way to help us understand this.

While I really love your story, your creativity / innovation, and the moral of your story, I was a bit lost following all the different names and keeping up with who is who as we transition from body to body. The ending is a bit confusing as well.

Overall, very nice and powerful story.

Thank you so much for the feedback David. I think I would actually add names when you leap in someone else’s body as you will see in movies or shows showing the title to the next chapter.