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Gabe

Wow! Your art style is fantastic! Though I have to admit, this story reel was a little underwhelming. It would have been great to know more about the magic school that the main character wanted to go to and her relationship with the red lady! Still great job with the story!

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Aug 23, 2022, 1:19 AM

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Jamila

I love this submission a lot! Your art was just so incredibly done. Silent films without narration can be a lot of fun to make, but often times people don't do the best job executing the drawings in a way that still makes the film clear. I'm happy to say that yours WAS really clear--I totally got the story, as you did a great job with the drawings and music. I wouldn't have known that much about Keket without the description, but that doesn't really matter to me much. Great job on such an incredibly well done film!

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Aug 21, 2022, 6:35 PM

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Mason

This was really good and I can't believe you did this so quickly! Your drawings are really good and the main point of this story, the moral, is well done. It is also really important. I am glad you tried and didn't give up because this was worth it. Plus, it is always good like you said, when you can learn many things.

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Aug 21, 2022, 5:19 PM

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I’m will be honest. This was a last minute thing. I have not been productive these past weeks and wasn’t drawing. So this was all did in a few hours. So sorry if it’s not as understandable. I would like to say I tried and that’s what matters. I did however learn many things.

Alexandria is a witch robot who seems to be failing all her class in magic school. And because of this, she might end up having to be kicked out the school.

So she studies hard, only to find herself sinking in books on top of books on top of books. Nothing helped and she grew tired and became scared of what may happen to her in school. Come to find out her door was unlocked and some what of a mother figure to her shows up.

Her name is Keket. A very tall Egyptian woman, who cared for Alexandria since her creator went missing. She sees that Alexandria sink well and sees her grades. She wonders if she needs any help. Alexandria wanted to do the work alone to prove she was worthy of helping herself but she was desperate. She she gave in and accepted help.
After a long night studying and courage, Alexandria starts getting better grades and can continue into the school. She realizes that not everything can be done by yourself and help can be a good resource. Especially from someone you love and someone who cares for you.

This is where the special thanks would go!  I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.

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