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Siddharth
Hey Team 'There's a boot in my snake'!
Great job with the story! I watched your reel and it gave me some good young-adult story kind of vibes! But then when I went and read the spoiler part of the description, I was blown away! That's some really cool use of metaphors, man!
My only suggestion to you for your future projects would be that if there's a way you can incorporate these metaphors directly into the video reel, that would be just awesome! Because if someone doesn't come back and read the rest of the description, they'd miss a very significant part of the story and creativity, which wouldn't be ideal, right?
I thought your drawings were pretty simple yet they very smoothly conveyed what you wanted to show to the audience! And the narration was well paced and very well written I must say! All in all, great work with the submission! Good luck for all your future projects! :)
Aug 26, 2022, 5:55 PM
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This story, although can be improved upon, is a basic idea I had representing a very important problem in todays society. The story focuses on Casey with his two best friends Amora and Brian and his love interest Niko. Now there is a spoiler, a lens you can look through once you watch the video to let the story fall in its place, so once you've finished it, read the bottom of this page.
This story was built to be seen through the body of Casey. Meaning his friends Amora was his heart, Brian was his brain, and Niko was nicotine. Their special hangout is Casey's body, so as time goes on with this addiction to Niko, it slowly becomes darker and more torn.
This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
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There's a boot in my snake
Micah
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