I've been following this project as it has developed over the course of this eight-week program and it is truly amazing. The camera angles, the characterization, the mystery, and the story progression are just so well-crafted. I can't wait to see what creative endeavors you tackle next!

Wow! Your story had great flow, clear visuals, and natural character arcs. I loved the wicked grandma style as it (for me) was clearly through the boy’s mind, adding into his misunderstanding. The end fit so well, particularly as she seems evil again only to find a disgusting biscuit in the sofa: comedic, and a great link to her growth and the boy’s misunderstanding in one. I think it can be enjoyed by a whole range of ages and backgrounds as it’s nuanced, entertaining, and has themes familiar in life such as memory loss.

Very good work! I am impressed by your detailed and creative drawings. I really enjoy your drawing style. I like that your story's end connects well with the story's beginning. The character growth is clear. Congrats!

What a great story! I love how the main characters perspective is flawed throughout the first two acts, thinking their grandmother is up to something suspicious while she actually is struggling with her memory. I feel like this highlights the moral of your story and creates a really touching dynamic between the characters in the final act. The art style is great and convey enough details to make your story very easy to follow. I especially like the ending sequence where the grandmother finds a cookie in the couch, what a great callback. Amazing job!

Awesome job. Introducing your character as being a sherlock holmes esque character preps the audience for the type of story you will be telling. From knowing that he likes to solve puzzles/mysteries, we (the audience) can guess that this character trait will be important down the line. The hardest part, I imagine, might have been introducing clues that would lead the character and the audience in one direction - the grandma being evil - while also making them broad enough to have the twist at the end - the grandma was just suffering from memory issues. The story worked really well too, because we were seeing the events of the story play out from the boy's perspective; he's an untrustworthy source, so we (the audience) ONLY see the things he thinks he sees. This was a really great story through and through, and your drawing abilities really captured the intricacies of storytelling here.

Hi! I really like your story! I don't know how I haven't come across it until now. There are so many to review that it's impossible to give feedback to all of them!

Your drawings are absolutely stunning, you have a great amount of detail and your animations are great! By the way, I love your acting with the voices, you are very expressive!

I really like the unusualness of your story. Normally grandparents are portrayed as lovable characters, but in your story you make her look like someone bad with that evil laugh. In the end, you make her look like someone good again, absolutely great!

Congratulations on finishing the Xperiential program!

Hi Milty!!!

Excellent job! I love your character and how you implemented cute little bits of humor throughout the story! I felt that the ideas were communicated clearly and effectively! Wonderful job!

Hello Milty,

I love your story! I loved the creativity and the artwork they were both outstanding and beyond enjoyable! Great job! You did an amazing job!

Love your story
It's simple but meaningful
Also, the voice of grandma is very interesting XD

I loved it, I was very curious from the beginning about this story and in the end I really liked it

Hi Milty,

You have amazing illustration skills—loved the composition of each image, how the characters and their environments are drawn, and how you utilized shading to illustrate feelings. Great work.

I loved the story, and think you did a fabulous job at keeping it short, sweet, but still carrying a strong message and learning. The touch of humor was also great!

Amazing work!