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J (1 like)
I like the moral of the story.
I'm not confused at all.
I also like the background in the story.
Aug 23, 2022, 7:14 PM
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Kathleen (1 helpful)
This story touches on a lot of what inclusion requires, and how we need to really work to spread this message. The pictures are starting to support the whole story. While finding a quiet place to record is a real challenge in your situation, let's try to design a way in which that can happen. Great progress on storytelling!!!
Aug 22, 2022, 8:40 PM
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Ness (1 like, 1 helpful)
I love the pictures! They are amazing! Although, while I can kind of tell what the story is through the pictures, the music is too loud, and it is really hard for me to hear your voice! You did a great job, but if it is possible resubmit with quieter music. Again, great job, the editing and pacing were great! And thr pictures, again, were amazing! So, good job!
Aug 22, 2022, 2:26 PM
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Nicolas
I like the hand drawings.
Aug 22, 2022, 3:51 AM
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Zynah (1 helpful)
I loved the moral of the story which is beautiful! The music was also a nice addition, but it was a bit loud for me. Still though the story was on point, the music and the images to go along with them
Aug 21, 2022, 7:02 PM
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Samara (2 likes)
Your story is very touching, I have a lot of trouble with self appreciation, but this really motivates me to keep working hard! I love this story, good job!
Aug 21, 2022, 2:24 PM
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Mason (2 likes)
I really liked your story and the moral. Appreciating ourselves and our circumstances is so important and so is helping each other. One of the most important lessons and I like how you created a story that ended this way. Great work on your final project!! I think your drawings and story were so good!
Aug 20, 2022, 6:15 PM
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Here's my full story. Sorry for the recording background it's a little bit noisy.
This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
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