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Annabelle (1 like, 1 helpful)
I loved this story so much!!! I loved the visuals and how instead of using a black liner you used pink. I also loved watching the two of them develop and watch Moxie run after Millie and you could feel the genuine care Moxie felt for Millie and how she didn't want to lose her. I thought this story was amazing from the visuals to character arcs, to the story to the pacing. Overall this story was amazing and you should be proud!
Aug 21, 2022, 5:56 PM
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Mason (1 like, 1 helpful)
I was excited to see your final project. Your style has been so good from the beginning and has set your story apart. The story flowed so well, from the beginning to the end, it was done very well. Your drawings are so good and the use of light, reflection, all of it was really nice. I have enjoyed following this story!
Aug 20, 2022, 9:48 PM
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Nicolas (1 like, 1 helpful)
The color and style were off-the-hook! I just felt that the story spine was overly present in the story. However, the idea of the story was great. I loved it! This was genuinely one of my favorites.
Aug 20, 2022, 5:15 PM
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A million thanks to all my peers and all of the artists that gave tips and ideas during the live streams. Thank you to my family and friends for being with me during this busy summer, I would never have been able to do it without you.
This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
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