I loved it and can't wait to see the rest! I liked your art style and the storyline. I actually found nothing confusing

The idea is so great! I would love to see your finished work. The art is so good as well.

I really love the set up here , I too have always had the thought how to animals see the human world we live in , and to see someone who used to be a cat experiencing all these new things and sights is very fascinating idea , I do wonder however , what gives Navi the motivation to return to the forest or will she return at all ? Maybe the forest is under threat of being destroyed and she must fight for her home . I would also like the see what other abilities the other cats have as well as the harmony of the forest

The art is amazing! I hope the rest of your story is continued because that was a really good start!

Even though our class is done, I hope you continue with this story. I can see there is a lot of potential and you are a really good artist. Good luck and I did enjoy it!

Good job so far! I am excited to see the rest of the story! Your illustrations were so detailed and cool, my favorite one was the first one! So far, the story is pretty interesting, but I am confused on how Navi turned into a human. It felt a little out of place and sudden, but I eventually understood that it was her gift. The story is confusing me a little so far, but maybe once the rest is finished it will be clearer! Again, the drawings are so cool! I also feel that the cat could have been developed a little more, but its design was so cute. Good work!