Well done! so many clear images with great depth and leading of the eye. Your story had good flow, felt natural, and had a nice and relatable message. It was very emotive, congrats!

Congratulations on finishing! Sweet message and the story runs along well.. I love that you can here a kid in the background ;)

I really enjoyed your story. The twist of the magic pencil is something I was not expecting. It was powerful and plays a key role in the development of the arc of your main character. Your use of music really enhances the story. I love your storyboards and your use of different shot types and camera angles. The dialogue you use helps me connect and advances the story. Very well done.

I love how the moral of the story is embedded in such a natural way throughout the story. Very powerful. Well done.