Hi Survona, congratulations for completing your storyreel! I loved your presentation and narration, its so fun, emotional, and dynamic. What a sweet but tragic story, I feel so much for Magik and her struggle to achieve 1st place to make Namine proud, and that intense sadness when she did achieve it and didn't feel better..I feel so invested in Magik, her dreams, triumphs and tragic story.. and Jasper is so sweet--Namine sharing her experiences with him was such a healing way to help her remember. Wonderful work!! I look forward to seeing where you take this story in the future!

You told this story beautifully Survona! I see so much potential in this, and grief can be a hard subject to tackle within storytelling. You did a great job at showing the character's layers and how they're processing their loss through this story and left the ending with a feeling of hope. Great job!

It is so amazing how we think we can avoid our pain, but some cases all it takes is an item or someone, who you don’t know that well, to trigger the feeling help you face that pain. I am curious what will happen next for Magik, will she move back home, will she open to her family and they visit her, in her new place? I think you do a great job giving us layers of your story, in showing the competition after Namine’s death still wasn’t enough. There is no way Magik could keep Namine out of her life, physically or spiritually, and that is expressed clearly in the storytelling. Good luck with your creative journey!
Paige