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Maya
This is quite an intriguing story! I think this has quite an interesting message, especially with how one of the characters values quantity while the other values quality. I think this is very applicable to how people strive to live in society today. I really enjoy your narration but feel like the visuals speak for themselves! If you continue to pursue creating story reels or making animated shorts, I think you'll probably become more comfortable with leaving out that narration and trusting that your visuals speak for themselves. Otherwise, you have been conservative with where you use color which places a wonderful emphasis on certain details in scenes (i.e. at 1:54 when the yellow question mark and the color of the faces emphasizes how the characters are bickering and how the human is concerned with how their printer is behaving). You have mastered this technique and I think it would be of great use in future stories. Additionally, you have done a wonderful job with having the different shots they talked about and as a member of your audience, I feel involved in the story. You have truly done a great job and I applaud you making it to the end of this program.
Aug 25, 2022, 11:16 PM
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Gannon
I have liked watching where this story has gone. The idea of tiny people inside machines doing the work, is clever. Nicely done!
Aug 23, 2022, 6:00 PM
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Victoria (1 helpful)
This has so much potential! I love the character designs! (Specifically how the human’s faces are cut off, big toy story vibes!)
Aug 21, 2022, 5:41 PM
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Ana (1 like, 1 helpful)
This story is so adorable! The art style is beautiful, the audio is excellent and I love the simplicity of the storyline. I find this concept very intriguing and a first for me since I had never heard of a story about a printer.
Aug 20, 2022, 5:03 PM
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Nicolas (1 like)
The art style was great. Great choice of music and the art style worked well with the shots that you chose. I just thought the pacing was leisurely.
Aug 20, 2022, 3:49 PM
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Mason (1 like)
Loved the ending and I was so happy to help. Like I said, such a good story I never would have thought of. It was a fun story with a good lesson at the end. You are really good at this and hopefully you stick with it. I learned so much and will really miss watching these and getting to interact with feedback. Great work, I was excited to see this!
Aug 19, 2022, 12:51 AM
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Zoey (1 like, 1 helpful)
I was always so impressed by the originality of the story, and the final product turned out great! Congratulations on finishing your story. I wasn’t expecting the ending where you included all the commenters, that was so sweet! I’m so glad I could help with the story, it turned out awesome! :)
Aug 18, 2022, 11:43 PM
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Thank you guys for the amazing feedback!
Inky and Press are two tiny creatures that live inside a printer doing the things a standard printer would do, but after they suspect their printer-er may be thinking about buying a new printer, They must find a way to wow him, but in different ways.
(This course has been fantastic! Thank you for the fantastic opportunity! )
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