the music is amazing

I love the characters in the story it reminded me of my mom's favorite animal a dragon.
But what happens when Garcia hides behind the stone.
I also like the music.

This was a great story loved it no matter how far u got!

I like the story. The drawings and close-ups are great. I enjoyed the music too. I can't wait to see the finished piece.

Thank u!!

Your art is really cute! I can visualize the story very well! I really like your dragon's design, specially mother nature's design, it's really appealing! I do think the captions go a bit too fast, and maybe they could go on the bottom so everyone knows where to read! It is looking great, and it's okay if it is unfinished, mine is unfinshed too! Can't wait to see how the rest of the story goes! <3

Thanks for watching and letting me know! I'm glad u enjoyed the characters designs! Also I'm glad that I'm not the only one who has an unfinished project! It might be a while until I finish this story!

Don't stress too much! I think it is wonderful that you were able to submit something anyways. I for one really enjoyed your narration in act one. The music was just a little loud. I think the captions were a nice replacement for the narration but I could have used a bit longer to read them. Otherwise, the story flowed very well and it was easy to keep up with the plot. I hope you don't give up with this story you have and are able to finish a final reel to look back on one day. Good luck!

Thank u! Sorry if the words were going to fast! I really tried to pace it a good amount of time, so you guys can read on time! But I'm glad you liked it either way! I hope I will finish it as well, but as I was working on it, I found out that this story is going to longer and probably will end up a movie rather than a short film, but who knows!

So glad you submitted this anyway. I thought it was a really charming story. Nice work!

Thank u! I'm glad you're liking my story either way, even though it's unfinished!

I am glad you still submitted it! I will say, you did something really right with the story because you had me wishing for Act 3! ;) The music, art and story flowed really well and I think you did a really good job.

Don't worry, when I have more time, I will finish Act 2 and 3, but I started noticing that this story might be a little longer to be a short film! And I'm glad that the music and art was good for your taste, because narrating it was too complicated for me, since I have such a soft voice and I can't speak loud enough into the mic! But thank u for watching and commenting!