Your pictures look great, but I'm not sure exactly what's going on in the story. I think either dialogue or subtitles explaining the pictures would be helpful. Hope you develop this further.

Whoa, I'm blown away by the animation! It was awesome, just next time I would suggest adding some more music or dialogue to have the audience better connect to the story, but great job on the animation.

This is a great story that I think would be strengthened by having more time for the person watching to be able to follow the storyline. You have really worked on the story spine structure. I would love to be able to figure out the end. I wonder if you could add some text to replace dialogue to make the story clearer.
super work!

Nice job! That's a lot of work you did there. I get lost at the end, but the beginning and middle are great. Maybe, if you have some more time after today, try adding music and sound effects and it will really bring the story more. I can't wait to see it! Post it on Discord when you do, I would love to see it.