Hi Rosie!
I really enjoyed watching your submission! I must say you've got a great art style and your storyboards were beautiful! The characters' emotions and their facial expressions were so on point and vibrant that even though the story didn't have any dialouges, the faces of the characters still spoke to me!
Also the way you used transitions in your drawings, and the small details like when to zoom in on the drawing and when to zoom out, it was all very professionally done, so great job with that! :)

The setting of your story, an antique shop, was a really exciting choice! I particularly enjoyed watching the scene where the objects come to life! And I did feel very sorry for Mr. Mandy Jr when he lost his Dad! The only thing I am a little confused about, is that when Mandy Jr finally gets the idea to infuse not only the antiques but even the house with magic, which leads to the customers returning to the shop, how exactly does this idea bring about this change? Like, what is the big change that happens with the shop with that idea which brings back customers? That was something I found unclear.
But all in all, great work with the submission! I really enjoyed it! I wish you all the best for all your future projects! Let the art flow! :)

Thank you so much for providing me with this feedback! I agree with you that what Mr. Mandy Jr. did to attract customers to the shop could have been fleshed out, so I plan to add on to that scene to give it more context. I'm so glad you enjoyed my video!