I really like your story! Alice is a very relatable character and I definitely empathize with her! Your drawings really show the characters' emotions, and you have a lot of drawings, which makes it feel more like a film than a storyboard. Hopefully you get to add in narration and dialogue as well as sound effects, as these would really finish off the story reel nicely. I like the concept of Alice undoing all of her mistakes. The moral is clear: it is better to show your true self, including your mistakes, than faking perfection all of the time.

This story is super cute, I like it a lot.
And the end with the fall seemed like an excellent closure.

Hi Ploypat! Great job on your final reel! . Your main character is very relatable, which made the story easy to get into. I do wish there was a little music or sound to help set the story, and voice acting likely also makes sense for your characters (i think you already realize this as noted above, I completely understand the time constraints). Despite this, your great visual art and subtitles made the storyline clear. The idea that she can make people forget is a very interesting concept but it does make me wonder how/where that comes from. Overall great moral, i think a lot of us can be reminded that not every mistake or embarrassing moment needs to be erased. Awesome job!

This is so cute!
I genuinely love the story and how she learns that not every mistake means she has to completely wipe everything clean!
It has a good message to be a little more kind to yourself
I wish it had sound but even without it this was still amazing!

Hello,

I am very impressed with your art work! It is very clear and effective. You did a great job making every illustration clear and your characters distinguishable.

You also created a lot of drawings and so congratulations on that! It is clear that you put a lot of work into your submission.

Your story is relatable and inventive and I think you exhibited great scene choices. Each one had a purpose and moved the story along well. The back and forth between timelines is a complicated thing to convey but it worked well here. Way to keep your structure under control.

Your use of repetition in your scenes also did a good job of reminding the viewer of the stakes and situations and kept the story clear.

I also really enjoyed your ending - that "remembering me" includes the good and the bad. Glad that Alice was able to be accepted.

Overall, congratulations on completing this course! Looking forward to seeing where you go next with this and other projects.

Hey Trenton, I'm happy you enjoyed it. I'm also really glad you understand what I'm trying to do with the story despite the constant time skips. Thank you so much :D