This was hilarious! I loved the timing and acting. The drawings are clear and very understandable. You should be proud

The comedic timing is crazy, I love how fluid the environment feels and the amount of work you've put into conveying the various movements of the birds. I can tell you did your research and it really shows, fantastic job!

Fantastic work, incredible amount of effort must have gone into this. Thank you so much for sharing this

Hi Ty!

First of all congratulations on submitting your final piece. I really enjoyed following the process over these last weeks. What I really appreciate is that you listened to feedback and used it to make your story better. Well done. The voice acting, sound effects and editing are done very well. You can be proud of what you made!

Cheers!

Hi! I’m so glad to see your final submission!

In your description you say that you have added subtitles to help with your “less very professional voice acting”, but the truth is that I love it! I sincerely believe that thanks to your performance with the voices you have managed to make the funniest story of the entire Xperiential Program! I am absolutely amazed by the great mood you have managed to put in some poor pigeons.
I see that in this submission you have added a bit of dialogue when Donut flies out of the apartment, which helps a lot to understand the process of creating the apartment for him.

Congratulations on finishing the Xperiential program with such a great story like this! It has been very funny to be able to see week by week the evolution of your story :)

I liked it a lot, and that extra dialogue where it was not well understood before I fixed everything. Very fun job.

Thanks for all your feedback throughout and pushing me so hard. It definitely gave me a lot to think about!