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Jackie (1 like)
oooo I like the audio! and your drawings! They totally create some fun world building. I am huge of the character designs. it's very charming, and I love the flow of your story.
Aug 24, 2022, 6:01 PM
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Caitlyn
Thanks Jackie!
Aug 27, 2022, 11:31 PM
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Andrew (1 like)
I can easily see this being among the Exhibition Gallery. The story is well-paced, the conflicts between the characters' goals are set up nicely, the tunes that are played are nice and calming, and the artwork is very nice. Some of my notes for the latter include how A.D.R.I. can still 'emote' and convey his thoughts without a mouth or even pupils, parts of the background being used to set up either characters or the intended purpose of something in the first act, and how 'The Board' is portrayed as an ominous collective of shadows, whose purposes certainly don't match up Doctor Ainsley's and could be questionable at best.
As for the moral of "Evolve", there is the idea of a robot, well, evolving from its original purpose, but I believe the main message is about how someone can do or become something different than what was originally planned. While it is briefly suggested near the end, Doctor Ainsley once had an interest in playing music via the guitar, but has now created an android for medical purposes. But while her intended purposes for A.D.R.I. differ from Innotech's more militaristic ones, the robot instead picks up an appreciation for music, and even becomes gifted with the same instrument Ainsley once played. And at the end, A.D.R.I. still ends up helping out patients, but also works in playing the guitar for them, while Ainsley becomes the new chairwoman for Innotech, yet still finds time to join her creation in playing her old hobby.
Aug 23, 2022, 2:49 AM
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Caitlyn (1 like)
Wow! Thanks so much the kind words on our story Andrew. You really captured what we wanted to convey with the story. It was really fun animating A.D.R.I's expressions even though they only have blank eyes, and I'm glad that you got the vibe of the board as they were always opposing our main characters, always looming. I really like how you expanded on our main message of the story. Really appreciate it!
Aug 23, 2022, 3:08 AM
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Nathanich (Nat) (1 like)
Great job Caitlyn and Matthew! I saw your team story since week 1 and is very happy to see a great final outcome. Each act has a very strong structure so its pretty easy to understand. For me, I think the story will be more complete if you could show how doctor care for ARDRI and didn't really want them to become a combat machine a bit more. For example, by including her having some conflict with the INNOTECH people, or maybe sacrifice her own want to be on ADRI's side. Other than the story, I also like the music and the sound design because it really help put the story mood together and enhance the audience's watching experience. Really like it. Thanks for the effort!
Aug 22, 2022, 2:33 PM
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Caitlyn
Thanks so much for checking in to our final story Nat, and thanks for the feedback! If we come back to this story in the future for further development we would love to explore the doctors motives more. Thanks again!
Aug 22, 2022, 4:06 PM
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Crisol (1 like)
I loved this. I think the story was easy to follow and understand. The pacing was really good and I think the audio and music you used was very strategic and well used. Wonderful job!
Aug 22, 2022, 5:08 AM
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Caitlyn
Thanks Crisol!
Aug 22, 2022, 12:30 PM
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Ivan (1 like)
Wow you practically made a movie. I love the message and its characters. The only thing I'd love to see is if we can SEE how the android can be misuse for ill intent. very well done. Bravo!
Aug 22, 2022, 2:43 AM
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Caitlyn
Thanks Ivan!
Aug 22, 2022, 3:09 AM
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David (1 like)
I love your story showcasing the power of music, AI, and the intersection of Science and the Arts. I love the parallel growth that both A.D.R.I. and Dr. Ainsley have. The doc creates and programs A.D.R.I. never expecting that the AI would learn through Machine learning in moments of informal developing a love for music. The result is that the AI helps the Doc learn and grow as well following her passion for music. In a previous week I was a bit confused as to why a kid shows up after the AI plays music but this week this was clarified for me that the little kid is a young Dr. Ainsley whose dreams of music had been put aside and they are rediscovered as a result of A.D.R.I. . Very powerful. I love your ending.
Aug 21, 2022, 4:50 AM
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Caitlyn
Thank you very much David! I'm very happy that the parallels between both characters came through. Thank you for the kind words on our story!!
Aug 22, 2022, 3:08 AM
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Doctor Ainsley has done the impossible, creating a human-like android for the purpose of medical advancement... or so she thought. After a musical program airs on the television the android known as A.D.R.I. falls in love with music. Meanwhile, the company known as Innotech begins to have conflicts with Doctor Ainsley about the purpose of A.D.R.I.
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