Oh my goodness your plant characters are so precious and Sprout is so cute!! Each plant has such clear designs and personality! Your voice work was awesome and really adds even more dynamic energy to your dynamic world..And I absolutely appreciate your hard work with your color design, its very vibrant and it already feels like a short film! I look forward to see where you take Sprout's story and stories you tell in the future! Your story and pacing is very clear, Sprout's wants and goals are well presented and I love the moral you show through Sprout's actions..I really felt attached to his struggles trying to become the other plants, and then realizing his own worth and talents. Wonderful work Sophia!!

Wow thank you so much for your amazing feedback it really builds my confidence :D thank you!!

Very nice graphic style to this story!

Thank you!!

Oh my goodness Sophia!!!! You did it!!! Yay!!!
I really love this story! Amazing job!! I've been following your story and I'm so happy you figured out the story!! Good work!! Love the art and how cute the story is and ended, I can relate to it and I think thats cool :) I'm actually a voice actor and the non verbal effects and reax you did were really good, it fit well with the art style so good work there too!
I'm so happy to see this reel!

I am so happy you emjoyed it thank you so much!!

Love the character here. Cute sound effects. And it seems like you had a really clear idea of what you were going for with this one. Nice work!

Thank you for the great feedback!

Hello Sophia!

Wow! What a phenomenal job, seriously! I just absolutely adore your artwork, its to cute for words! What an amazing job you did! I love your story! Congratulations on finishing it! It was absolutely amazing! Great job!

Monica!!! Thank you so much!! That has really made me smile! I am so glad you enjoyed it :D

I love the use of colors and the overall design! I like the use of sound effects as well. I would suggest giving the plants the ability to speak as it would create more of an interesting plot line. I like the theme of the video as many have had problems transitioning into adulthood. Growth looks different for everybody and I am glad to see that idea being expressed in this video. It makes the story more relatable and compelling. I am very happy to have seen your final submission and how it has played out!

Thank you!! The sound effects i added at the end very roughly so theres deffo room for improvement there/potential lines but im glad you could relate to the overall themes!! Thank you for the feedback :)

I love how colorful this story is! You can feel the sadness of the characters when they get separated from each other. The music leading up to the sprout not being watered is perfect for that sequence. And the inclusion of the sprout checking it's "watch" is really funny ;) I like the personalities that you are able to create with your drawings, they seem like they are having a good time in their little plant world. Great job Sophia!

I am so glad you emjoyed it!! Thank you for your awesome feedback :)

Hello,
Wow, this is an amazing real and it really cool that you got it in full color too. This story really shows that idea of show instead of tell. Really cute plants and congrats on finishing your reel!

Thank you so much! That's what i was challenging myself to do so I am so happy it has come across well :)

Congratulations, Sophia. You did it! I really enjoyed your story and how you used plants to depict the struggles of growing up. Excellent job and keep up the amazing work. :)

Thank you so much Anna Maria!!! Glad you enjoyed it

Hi Sophia! I’m so glad to see your final submission! I know you have worked so hard to get here, so congratulations!

I see big improvements from your previous versions, you have developed the relation of Sprout with the rest of the plants very well. I like the sounds that you have added, but I was wondering why they can’t speak. If they are able to think and to share their resources, wouldn’t they be able to speak?
I think that the moral of the story is wonderful, a lot of times we compare to other people and feel bad about ourselves since we feel we’re failing while other people, doing the exact same things than us succeed. I appreciate that you have decided to tell a story to celebrate the differences of each of us.

Congratulations on finishing the Xperiential program! I loved being able to see how your story evolved over the weeks :)

Thank you Julieta!! I think the sound effects made some points clearer, I dont think speech would have been as effective! Thank you so much its been a pleasure to read your feedback :)

Hi Sophia!

I enjoyed the theme of this story and how you tied it to plants growing. It was a great way to highlight the struggles of growing up and leaving our comfort zone. The subtle sound effects were a nice touch. It was nice that even without any official dialogue, you tell a wonderful story. Great job!

Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it!! :)

Great work! This has the potential to be developed in many directions. Congrats on all your hard work.

Thank you Chester!!

👍 great message.